Anyway, the sentiment's there, I just don't think I should have introduced rhyme. It sounds funny. And the last sentence is a blatant steal from the Fargo tagline!
Tired and hungry,
Dying for food.
My brother is crying,
In a gloomy mood.
I cry for help,
They don’t understand.
I’m speaking another language,
They don’t lend their hand.
I steal some scraps.
It’s nowhere near enough.
But I am used to it now,
Living this life rough.
I’m lost in this planet,
On the run from the law.
I can’t find a home,
Living this poor.
My parents are missing,
I miss them a lot.
My heart feels like stone.
My legs tied in a knot.
But yet I keep on running,
Never looking behind.
Just me and my brother,
And my cunning and my mind.
I escaped at a young age,
I was forced to run away.
I would have been murdered,
Had I chosen to stay?
I’m now at a new place.
Somewhere I haven’t already been.
But I must be careful,
I cannot be seen.
Each road is an option,
Which way do I lead?
Will I end up in circles?
What are these signs that I can’t read?
When I entered this new country,
I thought we’d be safe.
But there are problems, here too;
They guide us away.
So I cross the border,
Wondering what this new area will bring.
A lot can happen
In the middle of nothing.
oooh no, I like it!! and not 'cos it's unintentionally funny...(sorry I sound like a bitch. but you know what I mean) The rhyme is a bit off sometimes but it's good!!! and please give us more scripts!!!!! :D xxxx
ReplyDeleteWill do... I found two, "Finders, Keepers" and "Let it Snow", both of which I made it clear from the first line that the main character is a "Chinese teenage girl"... I was so narcissistic, writing myself into my own scripts! Ugh!
ReplyDeleteBut I will definitely bung up "Let it Snow" around Christmas time, you know, for the merry lols. :D
I'm nosily & eagerly awaiting your UCAS post btw!
Not as good as the Charles Darwin one, much, much better than the Love Stank Redemption one
ReplyDeleteI personally hated the Charles Darwin one!
ReplyDeleteI see you haven't mentioned the one I wrote where the person who got bullied murdered their bully. Probably best to erase that one from my memory.
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